Date: 05/07/2008 09:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved the way you used the magic of the roses in this, and the title is fabulous (I always have trouble finding good titles). This was well done. I also loved your version of Ron. You have captured his voice remarkably well in the dialogue between he and Hermione.
Thank you! Titles are always a bit of a trick...except those times when they just come to you like inspiration and helps the whole story come into play.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: 04/24/2008 04:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww! This was so beautiful and vivid, I loved it! You can really see the love that these two share and I love the way he told everyone to shut up. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks! This was a nice break for me and I'm glad you enjoyed it!