Date: 05/31/2007 05:27 PM Title: One Shot
I love stories that deal with the line between attraction and fear and you did this just so perfectly. You've written a really startling little piece which could have ended up being a very straightforward sex scene but which, with minumum fuss you've put in a context which provides fully rounded characters, backstory and, most importantly, reads as true, psychologically (and physiologically!). Wonderful stuff. And, of course, kick-ass arousing as well which is something reviewers don't comment on enough and shouldn't be taken for granted (IMHO!)
Date: 09/03/2006 11:14 PM Title: One Shot
Hmmmm... read this on Annie's rec. It was lovely..
The current trend in H/R has them being very tender and shmoopy with each other, which is good, but reading this was fun for a change. Seeing a very forward, frustrated Ron.
And, well, up against a wall is almost always good! :)