Date: 08/02/2008 12:41 AM Title: A Convenient Arrangement
That's too tantalysing. I want to read the rest of it now. There's so much story hinted at. A teacher once told me that every story should leave the reader wanting more, so you've done well. I love the way it moves from the peace to the loneliness of the empty house. But I don't think you should have ticked the 'complete' box. This is offered with love and respect, of course.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. This particular little ficlet is complete as a stand alone fic. No worries, though, there is more where that came from. And the story is not finished; you're right, there is so much more.