Date: 11/08/2008 08:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this. Hannah sounded pretty hot and the sex was charged. What I found curious was how Harry could be so lacking because he missed his NEWTS. In terms of defense, Harry has always been quick to learn and master offensive/defensive spells. The fact that he taught many of the Auror students now in his class in fifth year and they seemed to be better for it strikes me as an act they would still appreciate him for instead of resenting him for not going through due course. And Harry has always been a natural athlete, as Quidditch proved, so I can't swallow him being bested by her continually. Harry's quest to bring down the Dark Lord exposed him to things that his fellow classmates would not have come across during their studies, so I still see him having an advantage. In fics where he's put on the fast track through the Auror program, the resentment usually comes from older officers who don't know him. I would expect his classmates to be more supportive, no matter what losses and hardships they may have suffered during the war. Interesting how you see Harry's training, however. Hannah has been interpreted in so many vastly different characters, but this cold, hard woman was worth reading.