Date: 12/05/2008 08:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bargaining
I enjoyed this. In particular, I like your characterisation of Lavender. I'm a bit of a Lavender fan from way back, and I think she is too often represented in fan fiction as some sort of vacuous bimbo. I think you draw a good picture of an intelligent, desirable young woman who has come to terms with the awful things that happened to her, and is prepared to take a chance on a relationship with someone that she thinks can handle it.
Thank you ever so much, sir. I value your opinion and am in your debt.
Date: 12/04/2008 01:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bargaining
OMG you have made me cry,piss my pants and happy.lol this story is touching.
'especilly th prt bout the doggy bg.lol.'
'n the engagement was beautiful.'
Thank you so much.I had to write this story the moment I read the prompt. I like what Scrib wrote, Going Home. It fits with his style. This fits in my vers of the post DH events. Lavender and Seamus have another adventure from twenty years in the future coming soon. I hope you like it as much as this. And I’m Writing the Christmas story, thanks to some prompting by Tellemonstar
Date: 11/26/2008 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bargaining
I LOVE YOUR WHOLE LAV MATURING. I NEVER REALLY LIKED HERE COS IMMA HUGE RON/HERMIONE FAN ALL THE WAY LOL.BUT AFTER JK'S LAST BOOK AND THAT LAV WAS ATTACKED.I COULD SEE HER GROWING OUT OF THAT GIGGLY TART AND BECOMING A WOMAN WHO NEEDS COMPASHION AND LOVE.AND WHO BETTER THA OL FINNIGAN LOL.I THINK THEY WOULD MAKE AN EXCELLENT COUPLE CANT WAIT TO READ MORE.OH AND NICE TOUCH ONTHE WHOLE LUNA READING MINDS :D I THINK THATS A FUNNY TWIST TO THIER LOVE DILEMMA LOL.KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
Thank so much. Lavender has somehow become the central character in most of my fics. I really don’t know how that happened. I think you’ll like she goes from here. And Luna? You just have to love her.