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Reviewer: rb2312 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 01:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

interesting

could be expanded into a good story alonfg the lines of others, where Dudley and harry make up.

would be nice to see what happens if Dudders brings a girlfriend home and she's a which. maybe even Luna or one of the other charicters, hannah, susan etc.

that would freek out his parents

 

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.  I am considering several possibilities for a sequel. 

Reviewer: SpangleyPony Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2009 05:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

like this, any plans to make it multichaptered?

Reviewer: genrou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 05:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

awwwww cutie dudley.

Reviewer: iris m Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 07:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh i hope you do another but longer, it's funny I had a kid who lived next door to me and she was always beating me up for stupid stuff, a year ago my little girl went to a birthday party and she was there with her kids. after we started talking she said she was sorry for it. now we talk to each other often..... so you never know.

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review.  It was originally longer; I had a scene where Dudley runs into Piers and Malcolm (the gang of thugs) but they wouldn't cooperate.  Not surprising. 

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