Date: 08/19/2009 07:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see a story in which Harry and Ginny's kids are all not perfect angels. I am a lttle surprised that they are engaging in such juvenile behavior, but you did need a reason to get them out of the house. Nice use of the "not touching you" throughout the story. Nice "instructional" scene too. However, it is not easy to engage in love-making on a full stomach.



[Report This]Date: 08/19/2009 05:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great read - just enough rumor and romance. Good combination and totally believable!