Date: 06/23/2010 03:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is a really well written story. Love that paragraph! Can't wait for another update.
Thanks everyone! I love getting reviewed. I expect you guys to police me if I start writting them out of character, losing their voices. ;) Another chapter will be coming soon then there might be a time lapse as I start a new job!
Date: 06/16/2010 06:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really think you have done great job with this so far. The emotions & actions seem to keep with what we know of the characters and the flashback interspersed with "real" time work well. Gotta love Molly but Arthur is right also. I have 3 teens and I have to say...good call on their conversation.
Date: 06/16/2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Nice story! This last chapter with the conversation with Molly and Arthur is my fav so far. But it's all well done. I like the way you're writing the flashbacks and how they're being interwoven into the present storyline. Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing!
Date: 06/10/2010 07:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
You are doing such a fantastic job with this! The emotions are spot on, and the characters are true to canon, I find. Nice work!
I'm so happy that you think I'm getting the characterizations right. It's really hard to step back from your own story to see if Ron really sounds like Ron and likewise with Hermione (and everyone else) I really appreciate any feed back. Thanks!