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Reviewer: Annemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2012 11:23 PM Title: Zenith

Yay, you finished it!  And a very nice ending it is.  I like the way you allow your characters' stories to gradually unfold.  Thanks for another great tale.

And it is now nearly 1:30 am and I must go to bed.



Author's Response:

Mark and Lavender will return in a story called Moons.

Thank you, and goodnight. :-D

-N-

Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2011 10:50 AM Title: Perihelion

This is a wonderful story.  I have truly enjoyed it.

Author's Response:

Thank you. There is one more chapter, set two days later. I'll be posting it in a few days time.

-N-

Reviewer: Annemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 09:28 PM Title: Transit

And you leave us hanging!  Please update quickly.

Author's Response:

It won't be long before the story reaches Perihelion, and finally, Zenith. -N-

Reviewer: Annemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 09:23 PM Title: Aphelion

Glad Parvati set her straight.

Author's Response: Yup :-D

Reviewer: Annemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 09:17 PM Title: Eclipse

You tell her Mark!  I remember him from one of you other stories.  Boy, is Lavender wrong about him!

Author's Response:

Thank you. You do, Mark has a chapter (Waning Moon) in Tales of the Battle. -N-

Reviewer: Annemarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 09:05 PM Title: Occlusion

As usual, you set up the scene beautifully.  (I just finished reading the Outlander series, so the "accent" was easy to understand.) 

Author's Response: Thank you. Finding the balance between realistic, understandable and offputting accents is a problem. I'm glad you think I succeeded. -N-

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