Date: 12/04/2012 12:54 PM Title: Annie Charlton and the World’s Most Ginormous Santa
Beautiful! You've done a marvelous job of capturing child speak without being either condescending or cutesie. Perfect! Sweet story, too!
Author's Response: Thank you. This story breaks so many spelling and grammar rules, but tenses and pronunciation are a bit beyond Annie. I listened to a lot of kids before I wrote this. Glad you liked it.
-N-
Date: 12/02/2012 08:37 PM Title: Annie Charlton and the World’s Most Ginormous Santa
Okay, here's my question: Is Annie magical? Or did she see the truckles because she is still a child and her heart and mind is open to the impossible?
Great story! You have such a talent for giving each character his/her own voice.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I really don’t want to give to much away about Annie, as I have plans for her. Here is are questions instead of answers:
Is Annie magical? – How do you define “magical”?
Or did she see the "truckles" because she is still a child and her heart and mind is open to the impossible? – Couldn’t it be both?
Thanks, this is the youngest voice I’ve ever used.
-N-
[Report This]Date: 12/02/2012 09:05 AM Title: Annie Charlton and the World’s Most Ginormous Santa
No beta needed! It was perfect! Lovely start, can't wait for the updates. A question though, can Annie see the "truckles" because she has magic?
Author's Response: Thank you. Can Annie see the truckles? Perhaps Henry was ight. ;-)
-N-