Date: 02/24/2013 07:38 PM Title: Ron Writes
I love this conversation between Molly and Arthur. It is so natural and true. You always give the characters their own distinct voice. I look forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks again. I'd actuallyficnished chapter two beroe I realised that Ginny doesn't actually appear in person. I'll make up for that in the next chapter. -N-
Date: 02/24/2013 06:44 PM Title: Ron Writes
Oh Oh Oh, what a great start!!! Looking forward to he rest. It will be interesting to see Molly and Ginny's relationship from differst points of view.
Author's Response: Thanks, my plan for this one is for ten chapters, each spaced ten months apart. We;ll see how it goes. -N-
Date: 01/14/2013 12:35 PM Title: Ron Writes
Thank you for the great read, and, too, for getting Molly off the hook. I've always felt badly about Ron being given sandwiches that he didn't like. :) In fact, I think about it quite often, because I pack lunches for my children to take to school, and it pops into my head whenever a lunch box comes back with not much eaten.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The sandwiches comment was not planned, although I've often wondered about that. I wrote Molly's dialogue almost without thinking. Those twins! -N-