Reviews For Disharmony
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Reviewer: jocelynsmama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2013 07:47 PM Title: Disharmony

Very cute! Loved the premise, nice execution :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. -N-

Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2013 01:02 PM Title: Disharmony

"‘You tried to snog my girl, Harry,’ said Ron quietly. ‘And you grabbed her bum.’

‘It was an accident, Ron,’ said Harry. They stared at each other, and simultaneously realised the ridiculousness of Harry’s excuse and of the position they found themselves in. They both began to laugh hysterically." - Me, too! This whole tale was a complete hoot! I loved the restaurant scene. I've had bad nights out, but, nothing like that. It'd be terrific to be able to come back at the situation the way you had our friends do. Nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is one of those story ideas which has been bouncing around my head for ages. Luna's exchange with Harry at Bill and Fleur's wedding was, of course, the spark. It's a good job they've matured. -N-

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