Reviews For Betrayal
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Reviewer: TroyWeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2012 03:57 PM Title: One Shot

This was a very good idea for a story.  Actually this could have been into a larger multi chapter fan fic.  I can see how Ron could have been so horrified to find Percy had turned so far away from his family.  Good to see Hermione and Ron support each other instead of fighting.  Hermione was there for Ron when he really needed him.  I think the best line of the fic was when Hermione said the day she couldn't handle Ron was the day she'd turn in her wand.

 Thanks for posting such a good moment between Ron and Hermione.

Reviewer: Roach76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 08:11 PM Title: One Shot

Oh My! When he whispered so lovingly in her ear that he needed her and loved her, well that just did it for me. Ron Weasley will forever be the man! I felt for him and the torture he had in destroying the tree house, it's true percy is his brother. It must be so hard for him, you did a fantastic job.

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