Date: 04/15/2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's amazing! It feels so poetic and so, so ... romantic? Perhaps the wrong word but it feels like it.
And it also feels like Harry doesn't know what he's doing towards the death eaters - that he just like them... But I understand also the other idea, that Harry is playing them against each others .. oh how cruel sexy Potter~! That's a excellent way to destroy his power! After all, he's doing it with love, as Dumbledore said he would! XD
I love it!!
Date: 11/27/2008 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is stunning.
I'm not sure how much of Harry would be left after he gets rid of more DeathEaters, but you had just the right amount of hesitancy and the business with the names, a sibilance with Lucius and a hesitation with Severus, is classic.