Penname: mrmoon [Contact] Real name: Barry
Member Since: 11/15/2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:

So I’ll be 50 this year. I got into fanfic investigating what my daughter was into. She writes about some of the Anime characters, and a little Potter (Draco/Harry, Lupin/Sirius). What is it with girls and slash anyway? I write drama and Het. I had these stories come to me, so I just wrote them down. Lavender has turned into one of my favorite and central characters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 I hope you can enjoy the path I’ll be taking her down. Most of what I write, and will write, will be inside the “Sisters of the Moon” series.

Please leave comments. I like writing, and love constructive feedback, so be as critical as you like. My ego can take it. My live journal account will have stories in progress, mostly unbetad, and I’ll update them as they go through the drafts.


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Reviews by mrmoon
More Than Memories by Bluerain Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 499]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA night that starts out inflicting the pain and horror of war ends in a way Ron had never expected. A story of love that stands the test of time, and of a passion undeniable, even in the face of heart-wrenching betrayal. Written pre-HBP and is now AU :)
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: More Than Memories
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122649 Read Count: 273340
[Report This] Published: 10/06/2005 Updated: 06/12/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I just finished reading the entire story so far. This is a great work, excellently written, and I love the mature versions of the characters. You have created an AU version of these folks that has really captured me, please keep it up. I am really looking forward to the payoff that I’m sure you have coming (I’m sure someone’s going to be coming, and probably a lot). Thank you very much.

Bare Feat by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary: *spoilers for DH*

Dean and Luna comfort each other at Shell Cottage
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Dean Thomas, Luna Lovegood
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Minor Character Death, Minor Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3346 Read Count: 1347
[Report This] Published: 07/24/2007 Updated: 07/24/2007
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bare Feat

Thank you for this story, it fits so well into the cannon. Really nice work. I found your portrayal of Luna and Dean so inspiring I wrote some of their further adventures. Look for “Pixie Dust” coming soon. I hope you approve.



Author's Response: I appreciate that! Thank you so much! The idea of Dean/Luna had never occurred to me before Deathly Hallows, but I really like it. Good for you! I'll keep an eye out for it!

Book One: Discovery by Amythis Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary: This is the first in a six-part series called Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal), showing Hermione's POV of canon. Since Philosopher's Stone and Chamber of Secrets are so short, Book One covers from Hermione's 11th birthday to the end of her second year at Hogwarts.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Minerva McGonagall, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid
Genres: Comedy, Trio
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal)
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80493 Read Count: 27003
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2007 Updated: 10/26/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Eight: Enemies

(“Alakazampax: For the Young Witch on the Fly.”) to funny. It's hard to write good comedy. Well done. I really like your work, and I check for new chapters often. Keep it up.

Lost and Found by coffee_n_cocoa Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Lavender lost track of Neville after the war until a chance encounter brought him back into her life. She’s not about to lose him again.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Lavender Brown, Neville Longbottom
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5666 Read Count: 582
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2008 Updated: 01/24/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent story. I feel that Lavender gets a bad rap in most stories, and it’s good to see her act like a Gryffindor. Well done.

The Weaving of Life's Tapestry by UnrequitedDream Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Beginning in the Christmas season five years after the Final Battle, this story traces pivotal events in the life of everyone's favorite prat and bookworm.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40503 Read Count: 7639
[Report This] Published: 02/07/2008 Updated: 06/23/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Kiss

I am really enjoying your story, please keep going. I particularly liked the bouncing back and forth between POV’s in this chapter. And I can just hear what Harry said as he was leaving, “So, I’ll be going then? See you downstairs in a bit? House is on fire, and deatheaters are at the door… yeah, right then” (sound of door closing)

Three Indecent Acts by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: The brothers Weasley try to find someone to help George
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: George Weasley, Lee Jordan
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Frottage, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-02) The Birds and The Bees Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-02) The Birds and The Bees Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6526 Read Count: 2278
[Report This] Published: 03/02/2008 Updated: 03/02/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/26/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Indecent Acts

Congratulations, I knew it’d be you ;)). This was a great story, funny, hot, and good characterizations. Thanks for your inspirational work, and keep on going please.



Author's Response: That's very kind, thank you. I appreciate you reading it.

One Month by Ginfan Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Tired of seeing the one’s they need to be whole with someone else a young witch and wizard take extreme measures to win them, and in the process, find something they didn’t plan on discovering.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Dean Thomas, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6397 Read Count: 4198
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2008 Updated: 03/20/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/09/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Acknowledgment

Very nice, well written, and it flows. For me it’s relatively obvious who these two are. It’ll be interesting to see how you work the dynamic of them facing the ones they actually love after this.

The Best Ones Bite by Ozma_katiebell Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Charlie can't understand why Miss Brown seems so immune to his charms.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Charlie Weasley, Lavender Brown
Genres: Ficlet, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 871 Read Count: 515
[Report This] Published: 04/06/2008 Updated: 04/07/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I’m glad there’s other “smart Lavender” fans out here. Well done.

Love is a Hard Waltz by mizBean Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Of falling and falling love. [Seamus/Lavender] Written for Springsmut 2008.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Lavender Brown, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9259 Read Count: 505
[Report This] Published: 04/15/2008 Updated: 04/15/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/16/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent. Lavender is one of my favorite characters, and I’m always happy to see her written as something other than vacuous and slutty. I love that you too put her with Seamus. They are a pair, and belong together. Do write more of her. The interplay within her family was particularly good. Also ,what earthlight said.

Our Happy Ending Book 1 by Amortentia Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Everyone wants a happy ending. Some feel they deserve it, and others are amazed to get one. Even so, hardly anyone gets the happy ending they were expecting.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Bloodplay, Het, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43192 Read Count: 5156
[Report This] Published: 04/19/2008 Updated: 01/01/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/14/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Just have to tell you that I wait for updates with great anticipation. Very nice AU work. I like it loads.



Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'm glad you enjoy our Ron/Pansy.  The next chapter takes place around Halloween, so stand by for some more "intense" passion from these two  ;-)

After the Flaw by KanedaX Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWizards fall in love. Wizards fall out of love. Some enter the world while others leave. Friendships are formed, minds are changed, and some discover that their family is larger than they ever imagined.

A lot can happen in nineteen years...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Aberforth Dumbledore, Albus Severus Potter, Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Charlie Weasley, Cho Chang, Dean Thomas, Dennis Creevey, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Ernie Macmillan, Fenrir Greyback, Filius Flitwick, Firenze, Fleur Delacour, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Hannah Abbott, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Hestia Jones, Horace Slughorn, Hugo Weasley, James (younger) Potter, Justin Finch-Fletchley, Katie Bell, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lavender Brown, Lily Potter, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Minerva McGonagall, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Nymphadora Tonks, OFC, Padma Patil, Parvati Patil, Penelope Clearwater, Percy Weasley, Petunia Dursley, Pomona Sprout, Professor Sinistra, Professor Vector, Remus Lupin, Rita Skeeter, Ron Weasley, Rose Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Scorpius Malfoy, Seamus Finnigan, Sibyll Trelawney, Susan Bones, Various, Vernon Dursley, Viktor Krum, Xenophilius Lovegood
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, General, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 237700 Read Count: 86531
[Report This] Published: 04/20/2008 Updated: 11/26/2011
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 04/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Fifteen Minutes Later - After the Flaw

Terrific chapter, I really like your treatment of Luna. I also see her as every bit as smart as Hermione. The conversation about existence was perfect. The humor worked quite well too, comedy is the hardest thing to write.

Those Left to Carry On by luvscharlie Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Death is hardest for those left to carry on.  This fic takes place immediately following Fred Weasley's funeral.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Fred Weasley, George Weasley, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Language
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-04) Rebirth Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2008-04) Rebirth Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3295 Read Count: 1491
[Report This] Published: 04/21/2008 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/23/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Exellent, you're on a roll. All three stories this week were great, but this was outstanding.


Author's Response: I send you millions of smoochies.  I only started writing again back in February so I hang (quite literally) on every comment.  It has probably been 10 years (at least- Just had a birthday so I feel the need to be conservative here) since I wrote anything creatively.  --- Thank you, thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think.  I have several more half-finished pieces to churn out, so I'm off to abuse poor Hermione w/ my Weasley obsession.

Choices of the Heart by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: AU for what really happened in the tent after Ron returned to the Trio in Deathly Hallows.  You don't really think they just went to sleep, do you?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6545 Read Count: 4474
[Report This] Published: 04/24/2008 Updated: 04/24/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/24/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I mean, why wouldn't you choose him? He's Harry Potter for Merlin's sake. If I were you, I'd probably choose him. I'm nobody special, you know

 I have lived this moment, and you captured it perfectly. I have great empathy with Ron, and you write him extreamly well. You have really out done yourself. Your're going to spoil us.



Author's Response: I think YOU  are the one spoiling me!!!! You write the sweetest reviews.  I have to confess this is my favorite part of the story.  I rewrote this several times, unsure whether or not to make Ron a virgin too, but I just couldn't do it.  He deserves to have the upper hand occasionally.  ** hugs you for all the confidence you evoke in me w/ your reviews***

An Un-birthday Celebration by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: George agrees to take Rose and Hugo for the day, so Ron can do something special for Hermione's birthday. When will Ron learn not to trust a Weasley twin?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2028
[Report This] Published: 04/29/2008 Updated: 04/30/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/30/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And the hits just keeep on coming. Very nice! Great real life situation, and  comfortable  married couple dialoge.  Plus, you do write smut very well, keep it...up?

 And a very merry unbirthday to you.



Author's Response: Luvs the smut, I do. Thanks for reading it and letting me know what you think.

Words by Attila Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A conversation at Shell Cottage.

Dean/Luna pre-pairing, if you tilt your head to the side.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Dean Thomas, Luna Lovegood
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296 Read Count: 523
[Report This] Published: 05/10/2008 Updated: 05/10/2008
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/13/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ROLF WHO? Great Luna Dean dialogue, Nicely done.