Penname: spidergirl [Contact] Real name: Monica
Member Since: 04/02/2006
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I'm a Portuguese female who loves HP Universe to pieces, especially Ron and Hermione :)

I love reading, writting and everything HP related!

I have a couple of drabbles, ficlets and stories written. Most of them are published here but you can find all my work avaiable at my HP Fics Live Journal.

http://the-randhr-den.livejournal.com/

Hope you can enjoy my HP Scribblings:)

Cheers!

A little Note: My stories have been betad by beloved friends who love HP fandom as much I do: belovedranger, guinchy, Redsioda, queenb23 and pili204.

Thanks very much, ladies :)

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We make some interisting Writting/Drawing HP Challenges :)


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Now She Knows by mench Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Ron finally had the courage to tell Hermione what he wants to say to her for the longest time.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1516 Read Count: 612
[Report This] Published: 07/25/2006 Updated: 07/25/2006
Reviewer: spidergirl Signed
Date: 07/25/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww,that´s so sweet!

I loved how Ron got the courage for says to her he loves her, even his hesitation on words choice, so Ron ish :)

And I love the ´begin a family together hints :love:

A nice and good first one,Mench :)



Author's Response: I've been impatient with JKR putting it off until the last book (I know it will happen) so I made him say it to her now.  *smiles*

Now When the Rain Falls by Nattieb Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: A summer storm reminds Hermione of a night in her childhood that at one time brought her comfort. Now after the events of sixth year she is searching for that comfort again and finally finds it by sharing the secret of that long ago night.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6360 Read Count: 522
[Report This] Published: 07/25/2006 Updated: 07/26/2006
Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/28/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Briliant job :)

I loved how you wrote R and Hr so ic :)

Beautiful R/Hr suff

Thanks!



Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Hesitation by modestyrabnott Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 119]
Summary: If one hesitates in his path, let him not proceed. Let him respect his doubts, for doubts, too, may have some divinity in them. - Henry David Thoreau

For years, I waited, wondered and wished for the day when he'd finally set things in motion.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: OC
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42512 Read Count: 26793
[Report This] Published: 07/30/2006 Updated: 02/18/2007
Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*sigh*
Ron loves Hermione.She is his true love , his soulmate so he resists to naiads.They being all ginger blocks the effect too...Am I right?
Oh P, I loved so much this chapter.The scene between Hermione and Gus was lovelly and sexy, who resists to a bloke like him?
He made her going out with Ron!Gus is adorable indeed :)
*loves him*
And don´t worry, I loved the tone of this chapter and I think I m not only one ;)
The naiads scene was very creative and it has so many hints about our Ron´s feelings and motivations.When someone focus so hard on its job, many times it´s for forget a failed love....;)
You ´ve done a excellent job with Hermione, I love how her mind tricks her,I mean her love for Ron is so obvious that in the moment Ron enter inside the same place she is, she focus only on him.She wants hide it but she cant..."You can run but you can´t hide"heheh
I love how Ron was a mature, calm and smart man :)
*drools over P´s sexy Ron*
He talks so much with his body, I mean, it´s fabulous how his body language says so much about his feelings about Hermione.And she ....melts totally:
So let see why I think this:

* Her jealous about fan girls
*She wanting go with him.She simply could ask him for bring some naiads hair ,You know what I mean....
*She rubbing his arms for warm them, she didn´t need do it.Unless she wants touch him and that was really what she wanted....poor things, so much UST on way!
*She not wanting go away from him.
*She forgot why she went with him

And Ron´s hint about the nature of their relationship for she could go with him was priceless, poor bloke
I think I get the reason of Ron´s Hesitation about Hermione:he couldn´t believe he found his soul mate and the love of his life at eleven years old age...
Ron never be in love with Wendy.
Argh, I think Hermione didn´t get it yet...
*sob*
Ron always be in love with her
*give me Hermione´s phone number, I talk with her*
Can´t wait for know more, as usual :)
*Spider waits with patience*
I ´m thiking post this rewiew on CM foruns ,only waiting for someone begins the discussion of chapter 5
Cheers :D

Wake Me by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: In the midst of the War, Hermione is kidnapped and held captive as Ron, Harry and Ginny search desperately for her. Hermione and Ron share a psychic connection, with which she tries to help him find her before it is too late.

A strong warning for this story, as it does contain the rape of a character and severe psychological trauma.

*This is the first story in my Awakenings Series*
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Rape, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52346 Read Count: 16016
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2006 Updated: 08/23/2007
Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Forcibly Taken

God , poor Hermione and poor Ron :(

 I have a feeling about what happened to her, poor thing!

Reading more soon, this seems to be so great story!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  I know, they really are in for a lot of heart-ache...  but, I promise it won't be heart-breaking for too too long!  Thanks for reading and reviewing my dear!

*caramel covered apple for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Forcibly Removed

Oh Poor Hermione!

I ´m really enjoying to read this story , Risie :)

Your Hermione´s voice is wonderful!

Reading more soon ;)



Author's Response:

Oh, hi M!  Thanks so much for the comments on Hermione's voice- I really appreciate it!  ::hugs, my friend::

*chocolate chip cookies for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Tentative Connection

This is getting more interisting after each chapter: you´ve done so well the worried and guilty Ron.

Can´t wait for to see more of that conection Ron shares with Hermione showing more clues :)

Wonderful job, Risie :D



Author's Response:

Hi M!  Oh, thanks so much for continuing to read and review!  I'm feeling very special.  ::blushes::  More of the connection is coming, along with more clues about who the Death Eater is.  Thanks again honey! 

*banana split for you* 

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Hope Fades

Argh, that DE !!

So cruel! Poor Hermmine :(

Your Hermione´s voice was brilliant in this chapter :D



Author's Response:

Wow, what an awesome compliment!! ("Your Hermione´s voice was brilliant in this chapter")  I know, that dang DE- don't worry, time wounds all heels in the end, you know?  Thanks so much for reviewing, M!  ::hugs::

*strawberry pie for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Bound

You did an excelent job in this chapter!

The R/Hr conection is great and yet so intriguing because it seems it´s a spell that doesnt work well yet...

My poor Ron and Hermione....:(

This is so good that I´m hooked! :D



Author's Response:

Hi M!  Thanks so much for reading, reviewing, and for the compliments!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it and that the R/Hr is working for you.  The spell isn't quite perfected yet, but the connection will get stronger the more than Hermione works on it.  Thanks again, honey!

*yummy cinnamony horchata for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Bound

You did an excelent job in this chapter!

The R/Hr conection is great and yet so intriguing because it seems it´s a spell that doesnt work well yet...

My poor Ron and Hermione....:(

This is so good that I´m hooked! :D



Author's Response: I'm seeing double!  hehe.  Thanks again honey!  ::hugs::

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Panic Attack

That´s natural Hr feeling confuse because her feelings and emotions in rape´s moment.Your explanations were great: I know your job is related with psicology,right? :)

This is really an amazing story!

Reading more soon :D



Author's Response:

Hi hon- I'm so glad you've had the chance to read through it...  your opinion really means a lot to me!  Yes, I have seen Hermione's reaction in several actual cases that I have worked with in my job as a clinical psychologist (which you already knew by the time I responded to this).  It's an understandable reaction, but so painful.  I'm glad it didn't scare you off. 

*sweet fried plantains for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/25/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Panic Attack

That´s natural Hr feeling confuse because her feelings and emotions in rape´s moment.Your explanations were great: I know your job is related with psicology,right? :)

This is really an amazing story!

Reading more soon :D



Author's Response: I'm seeing double again!  ::laughs::  Thanks again for the review honey!  ::hugs::

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Unveiled

Wow! What a great chapter!

The Memory scene was so well done, I had my heart broken for Hermione and also for Ron!

Great job! :D



Author's Response:

Hi M!  Thanks again for reading and reviewing!  ::hugs you::  I'm so glad that the memory scene worked for you- it was a bit hard for me to relive it and write those moments again.  Thanks for your feedback!

*mint chocolate chip ice cream for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Slipping Further Away

Another amazing chapter! Really liked the idea of Hermione could get psicologic help before getting her letter to Hogwarts :)

I really love your Ron :D



Author's Response:

Oh, M, I am so humbled and grateful for all of your reviews!  I, too, love the idea that Hermione's parents might have tried to get her some therapy before Hogwarts, because she was probably a bit odd or awkward before find out about being a witch.  ::hugs::  Thanks again!!

*dark chocolate bar for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/04/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Barely Breathing

WOW!! 

This is such a powerful chapter and one of my favorites! The rescue was perfect and Ron having to save her life was so intense and powerful!

*happy sigh*

Then that fabulous and so honest confession of his feelings !

*grin*

 Risie, you have done so wonderfully well this story :)

 Fabulous job, as always :D

Cheers!



Author's Response:

Hi Mon!  WOW to you too- what a lovely review!!  :o)  ::blushes::

I'm so glad you enjoyed the latest chapter, especially since there was so much action in it.  I haven't yet written action, so that was a first for me.

The confession was something that really needed to come- after so much heart-ache and pain, I think we all (myself included) needed something positive to hold onto with this pair. 

Hon, thank you so much for taking the time to let me know your thoughts about each of the chapters.  Truly, it's so good for my heart!!  ::hugs::

*chocolate-covered pretzel sticks for you*

Reviewer: spidergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/27/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Finally Woken

OMG!! Poor Hermione! :(

I can't imagine how awful and traumatic those dreams have been for her! And my poor Ron!! *sob*

Fabulous chapter! Can't wait to read more after that huge Cliffie!! You did this chapter so intense, realistic and touching, I really loved how you have been writting this plot!

And Happy Anniversary! :D



Author's Response:

Hey, Mon, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I really, really appreciate it and always love to hear what you have to say!

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far and finding it realistic and it's touching to you.  I am very complimented by that and by you following my fic.  Thanks again, hon.  ::hugs::  *cinnamon sugar toast for you*