Penname: Leviathan [Contact] Real name: Jonathan Andrew Sheen
Member Since: 06/10/2006
Membership status: Administrator
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I live in Pepperell, Massachusetts, USA.
My Blog for Fan Fiction is:

http://leviathan0999.livejournal.com/

I have Way Too Many IM Accounts. On AIM I am also:

LeviathanWORK

and

LeviathanLAP

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Seeking Shelter by Mad Maudlin Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Three people seeking shelter from the storm.

Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1015 Read Count: 488
[Report This] Published: 09/15/2006 Updated: 09/16/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/16/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Seeking Shelter

Oh, this is just so sweet and lovely. What a great story!

The Morning After by meesha1971 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHermione wakes up to a surprise the morning after Bill and Fleur's wedding.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Demelza House Fundraiser
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13144 Read Count: 3591
[Report This] Published: 09/16/2006 Updated: 09/16/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/17/2006 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Guh. Guh. a][siora\toi\rwto\

Okay, I may come back and review more thoroughly when I'm coherent again. This is teh Hawt! Your Ron-voice is wonderful, too.

Wedding correspondence by alloy Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA Weasley wedding night (weekend)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Fred Weasley, George Weasley
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 559 Read Count: 1534
[Report This] Published: 09/19/2006 Updated: 09/19/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/19/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Correspondence

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

Author's Response: Snigger Snigger....

Message In A Bottle by alloy Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Written for the CM "Sunburn" Prompt - Angsty Hermione/ Oblivious Ron.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99 Read Count: 1303
[Report This] Published: 09/20/2006 Updated: 09/20/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/20/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Message In A Bottle

I just love your Ron/Hermione. Always a pleasure.

Author's Response: Thanks

Midnight Confessions by alloy Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 0]
Summary: “I love you Hermione Granger,” he whispered, wishing he had the courage to say it to her properly, to her face.

“Then why are you snogging Lavender Brown?” Came an unexpected reply.

In the infirmary Ron & Hermione come to an understanding, but not before they make their 'Midnight Confessions' and in that brief period before Bill's wedding Ron takes charge of his life planning a future with the woman he loves.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Midnight Confessions
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49671 Read Count: 43218
[Report This] Published: 09/27/2006 Updated: 07/27/2011
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 02/07/2008 Title: Chapter 25: Look at You That Way

Wow! This has got to be the best chapter ever! Your dialogue is amazing, and your use of Italics! really, this is the most marv-- Oh. Yeah, actually, rather bad form, isn't it?

 Seriously, Marc, thank you so very much for allowing me to play in your playground. You're a gracios host, and I am honored to contribute in my small way to your universe!



Author's Response: Bloody Italics........It's a wonderful addition to my little universe thanks for sharing.

My Kindgom for a Horse by Attila Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Diamonds? Sandwiches? The Forever kind of love?

Romance and shooting stars and fireworks only take you so far, and they’re rather silly, at that.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Various, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1205 Read Count: 747
[Report This] Published: 10/08/2006 Updated: 10/08/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/22/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, the love!

Yes!


Author's Response: Thanks so much!  XD

Summary: A moment's respite on the Horcrux quest. Two lovers talking. A future Take Of Midnight Confessions.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drabble, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Midnight Confessions
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 615 Read Count: 3404
[Report This] Published: 10/10/2006 Updated: 10/10/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: A Boy And A Girl Lay Together In The Summer Evening.

Oh.


Oh, yes.


Yes.


Author's Response: phew, calm down...this wasn\'t even smutty ;-)

All That They Had Not Lost by Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: The rest of the world had ceased to exist outside of their circle. Outside of their search. That would they do now they had found what they had been looking for, and it was all destroyed? So much had been lost in the process.

Written pre Deathly Hallows.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: All That They Had Not Lost
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27572 Read Count: 19730
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2006 Updated: 02/28/2007
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/13/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh, my God!

This is so very wonderful, so warm, so moving, so touching. Everyone's wonderfully themselves.

Your sparse, sere prose gives us an echo of the desolation of Harry's broken soul, and teh warmth and love of Ron and Hermione gradually  shine through that fog.

Wonderful, wonderful.

I'm so glad I helped you bring this here, and so glad that more folks are going to get to see it.


Author's Response:

thanks L.

you'll get your commission later.....

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/13/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

you'll get your commission later.....

No, no, no! My good reviews cannot be bought... Only earned, my talented friend, only earned.


Author's Response:

sorry i missed this.

thanks bud.

Q

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/14/2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Get Over It

The old witch in the painting seemed to be taking quite an interest in the conversation, but looked away when she noticed Hermione's gaze.

Great use of everyday magic!

“We’re going now. Hermione needs a rest. I’m making supper tonight at eight. Be there if you want to be, but if you don’t come, we’ll know you‘ve made your choice." Ron stood looming over them, glaring down at Harry.

"You'd better bloody make it the right one, because I’m not going to do this again. Right?”


That is so amazingly powerful! That's a Ron, that's a wrinkle, that I have never seen in Trio fics, and it's just magnificent.

Oh, Q, I love, love love this story!


Author's Response:

thanks L.

 wouldn't be the same without all your help.

Q

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 10/19/2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Chosen Ones

Oh, what a great chapter!

How much do I love this? How much do I love the wordplay of naming this chapter "The Chosen Ones"?

How much do I love Harry, choosing Ron and Hermione?

How much do I love little Charlie? Oh, let me count the ways! I love her relationship with Harry. I love her intelligence, so like her mother's and her sweetness.

How much do I love the romance of "All my worldly goods I thee endow"? And Slytherin!Harry backing Ron into the corner in which he must, as he should, accept Harry's wealth as well as his love!

Oh, I could go on all day -- "You mean you haven't?" -- but I guess I've said all I need to. I love this chapter to pieces.


Author's Response:

thanks L.

you're a great cheerleader, bud.

Q

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/01/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Yes

Oh. this is so, so, so beautiful.

I just love this.


Author's Response:

thanks L.

wouldn't be the same without you.

Q

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/28/2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Dark Magic

This is such a lovely chapter. Hermione, the analytical caretaker, Harry the hero, concerned far more about the well-being of others than his own. and Ron, struggling with his uncertainties, and blaming himself. And Ron, out in the playground, taking out his frustrations at his own transgressions on hapless sticks and stones! You write his wibbling with such authority!

Beautiful, beautiful.


Author's Response:

thanks L.

yeah, i read a book once on wibbling and got my information from there....

Q

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 12/16/2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: One Big Happy Family

Love Molly, adjusting her world-view out of love for ehr children. 

Weep for Arthur, so gutted by what he's lost.

Remus' gentle shock, Girl-Talk!Tonks!

Oh, I can almost feel sorry for Penny, getting up the nose of that many Weasleys at one time. She does have some dimension here, which pleased me.

Oh, and:

"Well, you and Hermione are still on the clock, so how bad could it be?"

Harry snorted in affirmation as he glanced over to see his name. His hand was pointed with the others, at "Home".


Harry. Burrow. Home. Yes.

Twin. Funny. Yes.

"All Menage a Golden Trio at your house, then?" 

Oh, yes! I've been waiting for that line to "go public."

Oh, wonderful, wonderful.


Author's Response:

thanks for pushing me about penny. i know it stopped short of what you would like to see, but hopefully it was improved nonetheless.

and i'm glad that line is out there now too. i do like it. *grins*

Q

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/19/2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Sunshine

Oh, God, this is just so lovely.

Charles is such a little darling, and Hermione is such a great mother,and so her and you move the whole story forward while still showing us this wonderful family full of joy.


Author's Response:

thanks L.

Q