Penname: mrmoon [Contact] Real name: Barry
Member Since: 11/15/2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:

So I’ll be 50 this year. I got into fanfic investigating what my daughter was into. She writes about some of the Anime characters, and a little Potter (Draco/Harry, Lupin/Sirius). What is it with girls and slash anyway? I write drama and Het. I had these stories come to me, so I just wrote them down. Lavender has turned into one of my favorite and central characters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 I hope you can enjoy the path I’ll be taking her down. Most of what I write, and will write, will be inside the “Sisters of the Moon” series.

Please leave comments. I like writing, and love constructive feedback, so be as critical as you like. My ego can take it. My live journal account will have stories in progress, mostly unbetad, and I’ll update them as they go through the drafts.


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Reviews by mrmoon
Eyesight to the Blind by tjs_whatnot Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary:

Once a year Harry and Luna drop reality and have an adventure. This time it was the Summer of Love. Far Out! 

 

Time Travel Fic! 


Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Harry Potter, Luna Lovegood
Genres: General
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Drug Usage
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4710 Read Count: 452
[Report This] Published: 12/07/2009 Updated: 12/07/2009
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good story. Harry rolled over to face her so he could really look at her. His eyes kept trying to cross, but finally he cleared his vision and really saw her. She looked like she always did, a little spacey, but also truly in the moment. But there were other things he hadn't noticed before. A bit of sadness, a bit of grief in the corners of her eyes and the quiver of her lips. Harry swallowed and took her hand. He remembered how she had always shrugged it off when Harry had asked her if she was ever lonely, ever sad. Then he remembered the melancholy he had felt while in her room and peering at that picture she had obviously spent a lot of time on, the one that depicted what she had thought of as "friends." 

That was perfection. It’s the best  description of Luna I’ve read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really have enjoyed getting to know Luna lately...such a rich character!

Pulling a Runner by abigail89 Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Ron tries to deny he's turning thirty.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Ficlet, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Minor Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 773 Read Count: 597
[Report This] Published: 05/28/2010 Updated: 05/28/2010
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Pulling a Runner

What a nice little story. Loved the owls showing up everywhere Ron went. I’m not much of a slash guy, but this was a sweet, lovely piece that made me laugh. Well done.

Ticking Clocks by E Mitchell Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Draco waits for someone. Written for the HD100 community on livejournal. Challenge "Clock"
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Vacant Rooms, Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 537
[Report This] Published: 01/29/2011 Updated: 01/29/2011
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/30/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ticking Clocks

I love Luna/Dean. You've done really well here capturing the tumiol that Dean went through. Nice job.

Author's Response:

Erm... I must admit I'm slightly confused as this story as most definitely a Harry/Draco pairing. lol. Perhaps you've reviewed the wrong story. There is another fic on this site with the same title. :)

White Blank Page by Leigh Adams Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Can you lie next to her and give her your heart, as well as your body?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Bill Weasley, Pansy Parkinson
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Character Death, Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2421 Read Count: 656
[Report This] Published: 02/01/2011 Updated: 02/08/2011
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/16/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm with annemarie, this is the start of a great long form piece.

Coming Around Again... by deenas Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 0]
Summary:

Someone else's mistake brings Harry and Ginny face to face after months apart.


Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9262 Read Count: 1062
[Report This] Published: 08/01/2012 Updated: 08/01/2012
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 08/02/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this one. You show the adult problems that would face these two extreamly well. I liked the switching POV and build up a lot, and the payoff was well worth it. Very well done.

 

(Sarcastrow)

If It's Beaches by EruditeWitch Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Hermione thinks she knows what’s best for her relationship, Ron thinks he has no choice.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Minor Fluff, Public Sex, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6235 Read Count: 786
[Report This] Published: 08/01/2012 Updated: 08/01/2012
Reviewer: mrmoon Signed
Date: 08/02/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was definetly in my top ten this year. I allways look forward to your pieces for HPporninthesun, and this one did not dissapoint. Great job.

(Sarcastrow)